I've been inspried by HBP to attempt to write fan fiction again. I haven't written anything in nearly two years, and I'm always very nervous about putting any of my writing out there. I'd really like someone to look over what I've written so far and give me some input. I really like parts of it, and parts of it just aren't quite what I'd like them to be. Anyone willing/interested? Thanks!

Anyway, I'm going to put the fic premise under cuts in case someone hasn't finished HBP.




I am working on a missing moment surrounding the Ron/Lavender break-up involving Ron/Lavender and Ron/Hermione. I'd appreciate it if someone was willing to give me some input on what I have written so far.